Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think it has harmful ‎effects on lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.‎

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I strongly agree. Fast

food

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is a part of life in many places, and

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, it leads ‎to harmful effects on lifestyle and diet. In its essay, I will give reasons for my ‎opinion.

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, fast

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is made from low-quality ingredients, and fast

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is ‎tempting because it is an easy and quick alternative to healthy eating. ‎

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, components used to prepare fast

food

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are usually obtained from recycled ‎meats with added preservatives.

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, 'McDonald's' does not use fresh ‎meat for their hamburgers.

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, it can cause unwanted effects

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the human ‎body,

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as obesity.

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, it may be worsened by increased intake. ‎

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, while it happens for meats, it

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occurs in other types of

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such

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‎as chips and desserts.

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It is suitable for companies to save money, it is ‎unhealthy for society since it can induce diseases. ‎

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, even though It is the case, large populations choose its option ‎because of its convenience. To illustrate it, a person does not have time to prepare ‎organic

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, so they select something like 'Burger King.'

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, it ‎becomes part of their daily routine and is not beneficial. Meanwhile, addiction ‎may

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result, which can be detrimental. Plus, many companies like ‎‎'McDonalds' exist, and so accessibility is more readily available. ‎ In conclusion, poorly prepared fast foods may increase someone's weight to ‎unhealthy levels. As well as that, obtaining it regularly may cause somebody to be ‎addicted.

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, it is terrible for living and as a dietary selection. So, I ‎recommend cooking fresher foods that are much healthier. ‎

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

267 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

calories
saturated fats
sugar
salt
obesity
diabetes
heart disease
hypertension
nutrient deficiencies
vitamins
minerals
fiber
nutritional value
culinary skills
home-cooked meals
long-term healthcare costs
environmental issues
packaging waste
carbon emissions
traditional diets
balanced meals
marketing strategies
dietary habits
children and teenagers
lifestyle implications

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Fully explain your ideas

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