Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

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and wrong is crucial for

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, helping them stay away from

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path during growth. One way for them to learn

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ability is to punish them when they do something wrong. As my concern, I agree

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should be given to

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with wrong behaviour and

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the kids can establish good recognition of

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and wrong.

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, the feedback of being punished for misbehaviours will constrain a child’s

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actions and make them fear

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the same

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again. Without

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children

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will never know the cost of doing wrong

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, a child punished for stealing other kids’ candies will no longer do that in the

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because his parents and teachers will punish him or his classmates will mock him. These bad lessons learned in childhood will shape a child’s

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behaviour. Since

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are capable of distinguishing between

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and wrong, they are more likely to do

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things

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when they grow up and led a moral life, contributing to social harmony on the whole.

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, appropriate

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children

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. Excessive

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, actions that may be harmful to kids’ mental and physical health, only cause countereffects, which may destroy their faith and interests

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the

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they do and inhibit their talents

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specific fields. In conclusion, plausible

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can help

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to differentiate between good and bad, shape their

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in a moral way and build a better world in which kids will not be spoiled

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young age.