Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of the problem? What can be done to solve the problem? Give reasons for your answer and an example from your own experience.
The neighbourhood is one of the issues that families have a different idea about it. Nowadays, most individuals have less relationship with their
neighbours
. Although
there is a specific social concern, effective attention should be paid to solve them.
There are two main reasons why people
have less connection with their neighbours
. Firstly
, the mechanical lifestyle has been caused to the public people
spent most of their time
outside of the home for the sake of preparing necessities for their life. In the other words, when they come back home, they have exhausted their energy as if they just can spend the rest time
of the day relaxing and getting energy. Take working at weekends as an example; because of knowing neighbour weekend holidays are a rewarding time
, but when people
have to be at the second
career, there is no extra time
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Secondly
, the public individuals prefer to know their neighbours
that have the same culture. But, nowadays, travelling caused to the neighbours
be from various arrays of cultures, especially in the big cities.
There ARE, however
, some workable solutions to encourage people
to talk more with their neighbours
, One step would-be managers of apartments enhance facilities such
as celebrities and holiday event in the buildings in order to urge neighbours
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take a rest and have a nice conversation with their neighbours
. Another viable alternative is that people
try to take in some information about their neighbour's culture, which can be helpful to know better each other.
To conclude, less connection with neighbours
may happen because of many reasons, including busy lifestyle and different culture, In spite of all these factors, the rewarding solution would be holding ceremonies in the buildings followed by studying about their neighbour's cultures.Submitted by arash.dejkameh on
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