Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of the ‎problem? What can be done to solve the problem? Give reasons for your ‎answer and an example from your own experience.‎

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The neighbourhood is one of the issues that families have a different idea about it. Nowadays, most individuals have less relationship with their

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there is a specific social concern, effective attention should be paid to solve them. There are two main reasons why

people

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have less connection with their

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, the mechanical lifestyle has been caused to the public

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spent most of their

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outside of the home for the sake of preparing necessities for their life. In the other words, when they come back home, they have exhausted their energy as if they just can spend the rest

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of the day relaxing and getting energy. Take working at weekends as an example; because of knowing neighbour weekend holidays are a rewarding

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, but when

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have to be at the

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career, there is no extra

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not only in the neighbourhood

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but just a little for family.

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, the public individuals prefer to know their

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that have the same culture. But, nowadays, travelling caused to the

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be from various arrays of cultures, especially in the big cities. There ARE,

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, some workable solutions to encourage

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to talk more with their

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, One step would-be managers of apartments enhance facilities

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as celebrities and holiday event in the buildings in order to urge

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to not only take part in feasts

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but

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take a rest and have a nice conversation with their

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. Another viable alternative is that

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try to take in some information about their neighbour's culture, which can be helpful to know better each other. To conclude, less connection with

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may happen because of many reasons, including busy lifestyle and different culture, In spite of all these factors, the rewarding solution would be holding ceremonies in the buildings followed by studying about their neighbour's cultures.

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Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of the ‎problem? What can be done to solve the problem? Give reasons for your ‎answer and an example from your own experience.‎

Your opinion

Newspaper have influenced people's ideas and opinions. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative situation?

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