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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

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Fast
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food
 consumption has increased enormously in the
last
 decade. In certain nations, numerous
of
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people
 have been facing health problems because of their eating habits.
Consequently
, governments need to interfere by increasing taxes fee of junk foods. In
this
 essay, I will outline my agreement towards higher fees for
this
 category of
food
. Certainly, it will be helpful for society.
To begin
 with,
a
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country where unhealthy
food
 is expensive
people
 might avoid
such
 expense, because they have other options with better benefits.
As a result
, they consume less
food
 that
provide
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negative
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 outcome for their body. If they have available a chicken salad
as well as a hamburger and the healthy one
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, as well as a hamburger and the healthy one,
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 costs less money, undoubtedly, they will opt for the one which has a better price. Since the government is putting an obstacle regarding
fast
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fast-food
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food
 price,
people
 who really
wants
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 to consume
this
 need to make an extra effort by spending more.
Although
 it is not an impossible barrier to overcome,
this
 measure contributes significatively to reduce
the
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consumerism. Another important point is once the government applies
this
 measure, indirectly a country will have more healthy
people
.
Consequently
, less investment is required from the State to be made for national hospitals and they may act better at preventing illness than curing them. A person who has consumed good
food
 daily, and find out about an illness, higher are
the
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chances for them to have a better recovery.
Furthermore
, the nation will be wealthier than before, and more money will be available to make others investment.
Hence
 to conclude, I strongly believe that there are considerable reasons for
government
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 include over taxation
on
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 junk foods. It is a way to educate a country
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 to take care
about
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 their health habits and
also
, to protect them against severe consequences which they may cause.
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