SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD INDUSTRIES IN THE SAME WAY THAT REGULATES THE DRUG, ALCOHOL AND TOBACCO INDUSTRIES?

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It is prevailingly known that fast

food

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does harm to humans’ health so that

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industry

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should be regulated compatibly with the

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alcohol

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, and

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industries’ regulation.

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notion brings up multifaceted opinions in both agreement and opposition. Personally, I think the

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food

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industry

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is so different from the

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that the government should not regulate it in the same way as the

drug

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alcohol

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, and

tobacco

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industries.

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, fast

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may cause negativity for health;

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, it is not responsible for severe consequences in the same way as drugs,

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, and

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are. Those addictive substances are known to

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a change in humans’ consciousness, resulting in uncontrollable thoughts and actions which lead to malfeasance.

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, fast

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is not detrimental to mental health; in some circumstances, it even does good to people by making them feel satisfied when consuming delicious meals which,

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, produces positive energy.

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, a person eating McDonald feels pleasant as he can finish an appetizing meal and save time. Some advocates may argue that despite the fast

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’s minimal harm, the policy should be conducted so as to eliminate as many risks as possible.

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, once the government applies the method of regulating the

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alcohol

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, and

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industries on the

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food

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industry

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’s management, it will strongly be affected. It is not worthwhile to make great lengths to oversee

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industry

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producing hardly any severity. Not only is

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regulation nominal, but it

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induces extravagance of the governmental financial budget.

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, it will transgress other aspects; namely, allowances for education or medicine are now distributed to a trivial task. In conclusion, the

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fast-food

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food

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industry

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should not be regulated in the same way as the government does to the

drug

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alcohol

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, and

tobacco

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industries.

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SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD INDUSTRIES IN THE SAME WAY THAT REGULATES THE DRUG, ALCOHOL AND TOBACCO INDUSTRIES?

Your opinion

Some people think that going to the gym is the best way to keep fit. Others think that there are many better methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

More and more parents begin to allow their children to play on computers and tablets as they think children should learn technology skills. Do advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages or not?

Due to the development and expansion of supermarkets, some local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that closing off the local markets will bring the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The crime rates now-a-days is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?