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High school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize the teachers. Do you agree or disagree

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Teachers
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 play an important role in the lives of children as they strengthen the foundation of education in the lives of the
students
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. Some hold the view that secondary school
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 should have the right to investigate and judge the errors of their
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. I fully agree with the given statement and the reasons behind my claim are expressed in the subsequent paragraphs
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 with, why should
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 be encouraged to spot
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' mistakes.
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, it is imperative to know how the children feel about the learning methods of their
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, the school authorities should conduct the survey as
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 will give them an idea of ​​what aspects they need to improve.
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, assessment of
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' behaviour and pedagogy in the classroom will not only allow
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 to correct their errors but
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 give their parents an opportunity to know about
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 schools.
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, nowadays there is a great need for criticism of
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 at some places because there have been some cases of child abuse.
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, according to an article in India 20% of high
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 fear being beaten by their
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 for getting low grades.
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, some
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 tend to be biased and
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 can have a huge impact on the minds of children as they are vulnerable in their teenage years.
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, in
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 modern world education plays an important role in everyone's life and to get quality education I believe that it is
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 to know the classroom environment and for
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 evaluation and criticism of
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 is not a bad idea.
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