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‎ Some young people leave the countryside to live in cities or towns, leaving only ‎older people in the countryside. What are the problems of this issue? What can ‎be done to solve this problem?‎

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Nowadays more and more youngsters are moving from rural
areas
 to urban
areas
 ‎searching for better jobs and lifestyle leaving their old parents behind.
This
 essay ‎will discuss the problems related to
this
 move and will
also
 suggest an ‎appropriate solution.‎
First
, youngsters are moving to urban
areas
 searching for better education and job ‎opportunities that they cannot find in rural
areas
. In cities, there are good ‎universities which will give them better education and improved career prospects. ‎
Also
, plenty of jobs are available in cities. It is the predominant reason young ‎people prefer towns to villages. Unfortunately,
this
 migration causes much ‎hardship to seniors who are left behind. They have no one to take care of them ‎when they need to support them the most.
Consequently
, many aged people seek ‎admission
in
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 nursing homes where they may not receive adequate care.‎
This
 problem can be solved if governments create higher educational institutions ‎and job opportunities in rural
areas
.
As a result
 of
this
, more people will prefer to ‎stay in their villages. The government should sign contracts with big companies ‎for creating job opportunities in villages /rural
areas
.‎ To sum up, older adults play a crucial role in our society as their knowledge and ‎experience can help society grow, leaving them alone will lead to several ‎problems. The government can tackle
this
 problem by creating more ‎opportunities for the younger generation living in rural
areas
.‎
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