Nowadays, most people are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the leading causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
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at the cost of their physical well-being. In addition to Linking Words
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, they have become heavily reliant on electrical appliances Linking Words
such
as washing machines, dishwashers, and Linking Words
food
processors and do not even indulge themselves in a passive form of exercise. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, our earlier generation was quite fit and healthy in light of the fact that of routine workforce tasks. Linking Words
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people
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use transportation for long distances. Use synonyms
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such
as pizza and burgers. These processed foods are not suitable for health and lead to a number of health problems Linking Words
such
as obesity, sugar, and cholesterol levels. On the other side, our ancestors used to eat a homemade meal including all the nutrients. Linking Words
Therefore
, we can say all these factors contribute to the poor physical health of the current generation.
A possible solution to Linking Words
this
phenomenon would be to encourage Linking Words
people
to adopt a healthy lifestyle, including a balanced diet consisting of protein, vitamins, carbohydrates, essential minerals, and at least half an hour of workout daily. It could be done by spreading awareness through social media and educational programs at the school level. Recently, India's prime minister has uploaded his video of posing yoga on Twitter, and that fit movement gained momentum in no time and motivated the whole nation to stay fit. numerous IT companies nowadays are offering free gym memberships to their employees to promote a healthy lifestyle. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the government can impose higher taxes on junk Linking Words
food
to reduce its consumption. Use synonyms
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way, Linking Words
people
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people
are unfit and unhealthy due to their unhealthy Use synonyms
food
choices and lazy routine. Government initiatives in the form of public awareness and increased tax on rapid Use synonyms
food
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