Topic: Write a letter to your friend telling them about a new hobby you have started. Cue Points: 1. What the hobby is and how you got interested in it 2. How often you do it and what you enjoy about it 3. Invite your friend to try it with you

Dear Aayush, I hope you’re doing great. It’s been ages since we

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spoke, so I thought I’d share some exciting news about my new hobby with you. By the way, how’s your new job going? You remember how I always dreamed of becoming a good cook? Well, a few days ago I got to know about a website where a lady teaches how to make different countries.

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, I learned to make chocolate cake, as it’s my

favorite

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. On top of that, there are several delicious culinary recipes that are

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available to learn. Because of the help from

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website, I try to cook new things twice a week. If you were here, I’m sure you would like my dishes, as you are a foodie who loves to eat different cuisines. So, here’s what I was thinking

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if you are able to come on my birthday next month, I’ll cook several dishes for you. Would you be up for that? Anyway, I’ll stop here before I get too carried away. Write back soon and tell me what’s new with you. Take care, Avi

avipatel9831

Aug 14, 2025

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coherence and structure

Some ideas go in one para. Split them into more lines or new paragraphs to keep one idea per paragraph.

vocabulary and language

Use short, simple words. Try to avoid long, hard phrases and keep to easy words.

content

Add more detail about why you like the hobby, with one small example.

task response

Make the invitation more clear, for example say a date or plan for the birthday invite.

tone

Friendly tone fits a letter to a good friend.

content

The letter shows a real link between life and hobby.

task

The invite is clear and kind.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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