Children learn more by observing the behavior of adults. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion with relevant examples.

Children, in general, are quite observant and
this
virtue
also
aids them in their learning curve in their initial years.
For instance
, a
child
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gestures
such
as nodding and smiling much early than uttering its
first
word. There should not be any doubt that observance of various activities performed by adults around a
child
assists the infant in learning more than any other guiding accoutrement can possibly do. We shall analyse
this
statement
further
in our essay.
First
and foremost, the quality of imitating and following indications and actions is what aids in performing various tasks done by children.
To begin
with,
for example
, how does an infant learn to do nod a yes or a no? By imitating its parents' funny noddy heads. It is conspicuous that humans learn by imitating and observing others and it is cinch for children as well as adults.
Additionally
, not just in a
child
's initial years but
also
throughout his life, a
child
looks
upto
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up to
his parents and guidance and derive a big part of his nature from the
behavior
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of his parents and elder siblings.
On the other hand
,
for instance
, there are certain researches and arguments in
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of supporting the hypothesis that there's an unshakeable and unique individualistic
behavior
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which we all are born with and there's only little that can modify it. Yet, notwithstanding the good amount of evidence, it certainly cannot be declared the only truth. There could be divergent subjects to any statement that generalizes a particular notion but at the same
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divergents
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divergent
divergence
also
do not form
prepetual
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truths. To sum up, I strongly believe that actions performed by adults around a kid greatly influence its behaviour. As
such
, it should be the
endeavor
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of every parent to be at their best whenever around their kids.
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