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Some people believe arts subjects such as literature and music have little importance in schools today. To what extent do you agree with this?

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Music
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 theory and
art
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 subjects are always the most fun and entertaining part of school
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 ,a plethora of people believe that in recent times it is losing its significance.
This
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 essay will discuss why literature and orchestra have lost their special status in educational society.
Firstly
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,
music
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 and
art
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 as a career option has a less preferable choice in parents eyes since it doesn't generate monetary value if you are mediocre or not at a superior level.
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school
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 curriculum leads pupil to their higher studies and occupational decisions
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, institutions want to teach high-value subjects
such
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 as physics,maths,science and even sports which divert adolescent towards high pay salaries.
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, A guitarist gets less wage than
a
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an
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 accountant or a cashier even though working hours are the same.The pay package attracts most of the students
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,the
schools
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 are bound to emphasize more on prestigious career options rather than
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fun activities.
On the other hand
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 ,several
schools
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 lack adequate aid for
music
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 instruments and
art
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 gallery equipment from the government .Since the budget for
schools
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 gets divided into cleaning/science labs/sports activities at
last
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music
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 gets peanuts in amount.Due to the famine of professionals and instruments many
schools
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 do not even add
music
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in
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 the curriculum.To illustrate , In
India
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 80% of the secondary educational bodies do not have appropriate fund to support the subject.Financial aid provided by the government is more focused on science laboratories rather than on
music
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 instruments which decrease the importance of
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music based
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music-based
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 programs. To conclude,pupils interest in the specific module should be focused on
future
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the future
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 rather than the prestige of the person.Teenagers should be encouraged to participate in
art
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 programs so they can develop artistic and creative minds .The legislative teaching authorities should
also
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 provide financial support to
schools
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 so they can introduce
music
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 as the main subject rather than entertaining and relaxing activity.
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