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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

#students #period #study #fun #time #management
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 management is an extremely crucial
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 skill both for professional as well personal growth. Even , in a
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 it is of paramount importance . I strongly agree that
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 should be allowed to manage their
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 themselves . Analysing the significance of
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time
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 on
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productivity
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 of a
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 and how it acts as a building block for
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 of their
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 , every individual has different learning patterns which is best known by them.
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 it has been found that forced study hours only hampers
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 learning curve and often
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affects
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effects
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 the
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 of a
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. Due to
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 essential for a
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 to chose how to increase their
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 by taking enough and timely breaks.
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 important for
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 to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they can have fun.
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 ,
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 management is not only crucial in
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life
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 but
also
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 in all aspects of
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 . When a
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 learns to manage his
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 goals better. For
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 we know how what we learn as a
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 remains with us throughout our
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 . If a
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 learns to manage his
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 efficiently at an early age , he surely knows the key to
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stress free
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, successful
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students
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 should be the only ones responsible for managing their
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. In the nutshell , choosing to manage their
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 themselves helps increase the
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 of a
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 and
also
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 helps them lead a successful
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 . In an environment where
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 are forced to attend certain periods , it
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 stressful and unhealthy for
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students
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 should be allowed to their
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 management.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • time management
  • self-discipline
  • personal responsibility
  • motivation
  • engagement
  • peak productivity periods
  • real-world demands
  • effective time management
  • controlled environment
  • learning preferences
  • academic performance
  • potential drawbacks
  • misuse
  • procrastinate
  • frameworks and support
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