In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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and negative impacts of working from

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. The main positive points are saving

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. While the negative points are less

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save the commuting

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that many

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, which sometimes they spend two hours to reach. When I was studying

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Canada some of my teachers

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because

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not using cars or public transportation and

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lung diseases because of air pollution. The

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drawback is that working from

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made

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less efficient and lazy because they get used to

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according to their comfort zone, and no one is monitoring them. The

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drawback is that losing network connection from

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since the employee is using his own WIFI.

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might lead to a misunderstanding between the staff and the management, that they would think that they are doing it purposefully to avoid working.

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we were having a very important meeting and suddenly my WIFI went off and my manager called me and asked why did I leave the meeting. In conclusion, working from

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and negative effect on the employee and the enjoyment. It saved

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from pollution while, the disadvantages made

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less efficient and bad network connection from

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advantages are outweighing

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.