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Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To extend to do you agree.

#violence #media #society
In
this
 world of
digitalization
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 our social media channels are filled with
bad
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 attitude and violent incidents which makes people feel good about themselves and promote it to
the
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society.
This
 essay
agree
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 with the statement as a plethora of pupils and adolescents are heavily influenced by these acts. To commence with, An enormous amount of mass has started to incline towards criminal activities for sake of looking cool on
internet
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the internet
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.Apart from that views and likes on the
miscreants
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miscreant's
miscreants'
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 videos encourage individuals to perform the same task.
This
 perhaps
introduce
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 violence in the community.
For example
, Gun control in
america
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America
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 is very lenient and even a teenager can purchase it from the
flee
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flea
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 market .In order to attract customer towards
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ordnance
ordance
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the ordance
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 market many social media influencers have created entertainment graphics and photos
moreover
this
 has become a
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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 status symbol rather than a safety tool.
On the other hand
, politicians and celebrities play
key
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a key
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 role in spreading hate crime against religious or political party
propoganda
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propaganda
.If one doesn't agree with the political view of
certain
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 group
then
its
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it's
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 definite that he will be beaten up by members of parliament or even citizens which assist in forecasting brutality in our daily lives.To illustrate ,
The
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 US president trump has started a riot in 2020 and asked all supporters to heckle
the
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capitol hill which is
constitutional
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the constitutional
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 building of America. Another instance where
hindu
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Hindu
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muslim
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Muslim
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 hatred has highly praised on
indian
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Indian
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 news channels came into
limelight
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the limelight
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 because of
india
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India
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 and
pakistans
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Pakistan
Pakistans
 prolonged war and cold ties. To conclude, Our younger generation is highly
surpressed
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suppressed
 by social medial and entertainment channels ,violence created on these platforms reflect on youth if not supervised by parents or teachers. We should impose and prosecute with
law
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the law
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 for criminal acts going viral on basis of entertainment.
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