Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
At present, many
museums
had been open across the globe. There is crucial historical knowledge available there. Some art galleries and museums
have entry
fees
. However
, others are free. I believe that charging fees
from the people
have more disadvantages than advantages.
Museums
officials for asking pay for entry
has a negative statement in the public. First
of all, every country has art galleries and museums
. In these museums
, many information and historical things present there related to their country. People
should know about their culture and history, especially children. If officials put fees
for entry
then
no one visit to that places and years after years, people
or future generation would forget their history. Second
, Many artists make painting, sculpture and other things, if they charge people
to look at their things then
most of them never come and a few people
come to appreciate them.
There are a few advantages of charging entry
fees
. The predominant advantage is that every building and place need money to maintain themself. If museums
are totally free of cost then
it should government responsibility to maintain that place and the government have other important duty to do like healthcare and education. Most of the government's money spent on these places. That is
why museums
charge from
Change preposition
apply
people
to pay salaries to their staff and pay bills of that building.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of charging fees
in museums
and art galleries from people
have overlapped the advantages. People
have the rights to visit museums
free of cost to know about their country past.Submitted by rayatsahil7 on
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