People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

When to have children in a family is varied according to a couple’s decision

although

currently

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the majority of youngsters prefer

this

in

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later in lives. When comparing the trend with the olden practice, in my opinion,

this

has many positives and

this

essay compares both sides of the issue,

then

, conclude. Being matured enough to care

offspring

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, tends to

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a wide range of merits to both

parents

and children.

In other words

, as age advance, the partners

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to be secured better positions in their employment and family,

similarly

, they have economic stability as well, eventually, their child would be nursed better. In a recent debate,

for instance

, some scientists who have produced a piece of research report showing above 35 -year-olds are better

parents

than others.

Conversely

, unless younger

parents

had a sufficient source of income, they would tarnish financially with children;

therefore

, after making career progression, thinking about kids would be ideal.

Nevertheless

, there are certain minor problems

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appear when gets pregnant as age advances. The obvious one could be difficulties during both antenatal and postnatal periods, but these incidents may rarely occur since

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most of the hospitals equipped sufficiently in eliminating possible dangers. To illustrates

this

, in the UK, most of the aged adults who deliver newborns have been discharged, without complications and where infant and maternal mortality are kept minimum. As

this

is the present scenario,

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of aged

parents

are higher than any issues might bring. In conclusion,

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essay has viewed the two possibilities and I firmly think that

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process can be extended until having a stable financial status. It is advised that under no circumstance, should have early childbearing.