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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays, modern
technology
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 plays a vital role in an individual's
life
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. There are lots of
time
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 and money-saving devices
such
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 as dishwasher and communication tools
such
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 as computers, smartphones and so on which make our
life
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 easier. Some people believe that modern
equipment
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 only increases stress in their lives. In my opinion, It saves our
time
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 which we can utilise on other important tasks so modern
technology
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 is a boon in our
life
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.
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also
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 give example in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
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 with, It is irrefutable that
technology
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 makes our
life
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 easier. There are a plethora of benefits of using a dishwasher, communication tools and so on. A dishwasher washes dishes in less
time
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 and there is no need for labour. It saves
time
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 and in that
time
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 one can do any other important tasks. But, everything in the world needs maintenance.
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, when a person gets ill and he
firstly
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 goes for a regular check-up and
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 takes medicine.
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, when a piece of
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 stops working it needs repair to find fault.
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, our old generation is not familiar with the modern
equipment
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 when they do not know what to do with these pieces of
equipment
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 they take the stress.
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, it is a stress-free
technology
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.
For instance
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, my grandmother does not know how to call someone over the smartphone she touched the others app
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 as Alexa and
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 my granny afraid and threw the mobile phone and said how can
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 phone talk to me. To conclude, there are numerous merits of new
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 as saving costs and
time
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. While our old generation gets stressed when they do not learn how to operate these products.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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