IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8.5

You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work

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Dear Shweta, I hope
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 letter finds you well. I recently heard that you will be volunteering at a festival, and I would love to know more about it. What kind of festival is it, and when and where will it take place? It sounds exciting, and I am curious about the theme and activities planned. I am
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 interested in hearing about the tasks you will be handling as a volunteer. Will you be helping with event management, guiding visitors, or perhaps assisting with performances or stalls? Your involvement sounds fascinating, and I am sure you will have an incredible experience.
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, I was wondering if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers. If so, could you let me know how I can apply? I would really like to join and lend a hand if possible, it is one of my goals to do some volunteering. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards, Krushang

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coherence and cohesion
You have structured the letter well with clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single aspect of your inquiry. Make sure to maintain this clarity throughout your writing.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is warm and friendly, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend. Keep this tone consistent to maintain engagement.
task achievement
Your use of direct questions effectively encourages your friend to provide detailed responses, which enhances the letter's interactivity.
coherence and cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are done nicely, creating a friendly atmosphere that is suitable for personal correspondence.
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