. You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antiques shop. In your letter explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for

#item #owner #antiques #shop

Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter

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regarding

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selling my antique wall clock which is gifted by my grandmother on my 21st birthday. I have seen your advertisement in the daily newspaper. I

glad

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to know that you sell and buy antique things

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a good price. The item I want to

sale

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is a wall clock which is 100 years old and still working and in good condition. It contains pearl

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the outside of

frame

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and it

also

shine

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in the dark. It really means a lot to me. I know you give a very good price for

the

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antique items. As I mentioned earlier it is in working conditions and pearls are embedded

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it. I think 50000 pounds will be fine for

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antique item. If you are interested please inform me. You can call me at 9988776655 I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon. Yours sincerely

Brone

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Bronze

Brown

Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on Mon Jun 14 2021

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6 paragraphs

156 words

6.50

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