You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

#event #exhibition #show #friend

Dear Sam I hope

this

letter finds you in a good condition. I am writing

this

letter to join a music fair in my hometown.

This

program is a live musical concert which is held on 24 June. It is on Friday and the tickets are selling too fast. At

this

event Rohanpreet, your favourite host will be hosting

this

program and what's more, your favourite singer Ranjit Bawa, Harbhajan Mann and two more singers are coming to

this

concert. I know you will definitely enjoy

this

show. It is a 7 hours show and the show will start at 8 pm. So, I suggested you come directly from the office to the venue.

Moreover

, Friday you will come and we will spend a weekend at my place and will enjoy it a lot. I know it's been ages since we have not met so, I think

this

is a good opportunity to meet. Looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours truly Guri

Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on Mon Jun 14 2021

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

164 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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