Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The rapid pace of human evolution is giving birth to a
lot
of
issues
. Some say the biggest damage done is the continuous
loss
of biodiversity and wildlife. While others address environmental
issues
problems
such
as air pollution, global warming etc as some of the major challenges the world is facing at present. I totally agree with the view that preserving
the
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wild creatures and natural beauty should be the priority for mankind. We can not deny the fact that the flora and fauna of the world
is
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on the verge of extinction. Nowadays we do not see a
lot
of
animals
and plants in
the
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zoos and biological parks. The “Indian Tiger” is one among the endangered species of wild cats,
for instance
. Even the number of sparrows and pigeons has decreased a
lot
whereas these birds were commonly observed in the surroundings
few
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a few
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years back.
Also
, there are a
lot
of
animals
on the list of endangered
animals
like the giant panda, gorilla, Asian elephant, and snow leopard, Rhinoceros due to
loss
of habitat, poaching and hunting. So,
this
can be taken as the major issue, the earth is encountering presently.
On the other hand
, the world is dealing with several other problems like climate change, air and water contamination, greenhouse effect, global warming etc. These are some serious
issues
which
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results
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result
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in
loss
of life, illness and other fatal diseases.
For example
,
melting
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the melting
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of the ice on the glaciers leads to floods and tsunami. But all these
issues
are
also
somehow related to the
loss
of biodiversity as plants reduce greenhouse effects, global warming and air pollution to a certain extent.
Hence
, we can not ignore the consequences of these problems in our everyday life. To conclude, decreasing
number
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of plants and
animals
is quite alarming but we
also
need to take environmental
issues
seriously and should contribute
in
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preserving wildlife.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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