Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The rapid pace of human evolution is giving birth to a
lot
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of
issues
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. Some say the biggest damage done is the continuous
loss
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of biodiversity and wildlife. While others address environmental
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problems
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as air pollution, global warming etc as some of the major challenges the world is facing at present. I totally agree with the view that preserving
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wild creatures and natural beauty should be the priority for mankind. We can not deny the fact that the flora and fauna of the world
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on the verge of extinction. Nowadays we do not see a
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of
animals
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and plants in
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zoos and biological parks. The “Indian Tiger” is one among the endangered species of wild cats,
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. Even the number of sparrows and pigeons has decreased a
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whereas these birds were commonly observed in the surroundings
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years back.
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, there are a
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of
animals
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on the list of endangered
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like the giant panda, gorilla, Asian elephant, and snow leopard, Rhinoceros due to
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of habitat, poaching and hunting. So,
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can be taken as the major issue, the earth is encountering presently.
On the other hand
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, the world is dealing with several other problems like climate change, air and water contamination, greenhouse effect, global warming etc. These are some serious
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which
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results
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in
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of life, illness and other fatal diseases.
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,
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the melting
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of the ice on the glaciers leads to floods and tsunami. But all these
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are
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somehow related to the
loss
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of biodiversity as plants reduce greenhouse effects, global warming and air pollution to a certain extent.
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, we can not ignore the consequences of these problems in our everyday life. To conclude, decreasing
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of plants and
animals
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is quite alarming but we
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need to take environmental
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seriously and should contribute
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preserving wildlife.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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