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Some people believe that success means earning a lot of money. Others believe that success is defined by personal happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
people
 have their own perception of measuring
success
. A portion of
crowd
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 measures
success
 with
money
however
, others accord that
success
 is defined by personal
happiness
.
This
 essay would discuss both
the
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aspects followed by the opinion.
To begin
 with, a person who earns a lot of
money
 has access to better opportunities and top-notch products.
The
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They
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 enjoy a higher status and upgraded standard of living in
the
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society. It is generally seen that
people
 with huge chunks of
money
 have a sense of control wherever they go.
Moreover
,
money
 helps to
accomplishing
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 the endeavours that only the rich can afford.
For instance
, a person can travel in a private jet if he has huge wealth.
On the contrary
, sometimes
people
 get so engrossed in earning
money
 that they forget about their family and friends. Eventually,
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they
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the
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they
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 end up having a lot of
money
 but no one to spend with.
As a result
 of
this
 cycle, they do not get to experience true
happiness
.
Happiness
 is somewhat a way of living and
people
 were happy from within automatically get
success
although
 not always financially. Happy
people
 are content and live life to the fullest. They are expert at making out of everything resulting in
success
. A study has shown that
people
 who are usually happy tend to have a longer life. According to
me
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, there are various ways of measuring
success
 and
money
 is one of them.
People
 should start looking beyond
money
 to define
success
. I believe that
happiness
 plays a major role in the overall
success
 of a person in his life rather than
money
.
Although
money
 can't buy
happiness
however
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, it can help us buying things
which
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that
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 makes us happy.
Nevertheless
, that kind of
happiness
 survives for a short period. It depends on
people
 on how they like to view
success
 but now
its
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it's
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 time that they should come forward and look on the other side as well that elucidate
success
.
Success
 should not only be monetary but satiating too.
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