More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays, an increasing
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of
animals
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are on the edge of extinction. The main reasons for
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problem are overpopulation and
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, deforestation.
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issue can be solved when there will be a
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area for them as well as the government must have to take
rehabilitation
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programme
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for those species.
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population and deforestation are the main reasons for
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number
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of people are increasing, so more people need more space to live.
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, they are destroying the forests to make their shelter.
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, people are cutting down trees in a large
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.
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, the natural habitat of wild
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are
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disturbing.
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, a lack of
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living space for endangered
spacies
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species
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extinctuon
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extinction
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, in Bangladesh, The Royal Bengal Tiger is the most endangered animal, because their living
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which is the Sundorban is changing its habitat, and the main reason is human. They not only cutting down trees but
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creating
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with the habitat of
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.
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issue can be solved if the authority
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place
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for
animals
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and
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, they should take the
rehabilitation
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programme
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. When there will be a specific area for
animals
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,
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those creatures can move easily and
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, they will have a proper
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for living.
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, the state ought to try to save endangered
spacies
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species
. If they have a proper plan,
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those
animals
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can bring back easily
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nature. A prime example is Nepal, they have a particular
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for
animals
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as well as a specific
rehabilitation
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programme
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has taken to save endangered
animals
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. In conclusion, the growth of population is the main cause of
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problem.
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,
this
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can be solved if the government give a
separated
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place
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for
animals
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and
also
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, they should take
rehabilitation
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programme
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.
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