More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, an increasing
number
of
animals
are on the edge of extinction. The main reasons for
this
problem are overpopulation and
also
, deforestation.
This
issue can be solved when there will be a
separated
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area for them as well as the government must have to take
rehabilitation
programme
for those species.
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number of
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population and deforestation are the main reasons for
this
. As
number
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of people are increasing, so more people need more space to live.
As a result
, they are destroying the forests to make their shelter.
Moreover
, people are cutting down trees in a large
number
.
Hence
, the natural habitat of wild
animals
are
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disturbing.
Therefore
, a lack of
a
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living space for endangered
spacies
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species
is the main reason for their
extinctuon
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extinction
.
For instance
, in Bangladesh, The Royal Bengal Tiger is the most endangered animal, because their living
place
which is the Sundorban is changing its habitat, and the main reason is human. They not only cutting down trees but
also
creating
problem
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with the habitat of
animals
.
This
issue can be solved if the authority
give
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separated
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place
for
animals
and
also
, they should take the
rehabilitation
programme
. When there will be a specific area for
animals
,
then
those creatures can move easily and
also
, they will have a proper
place
for living.
Besides
, the state ought to try to save endangered
spacies
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species
. If they have a proper plan,
then
those
animals
can bring back easily
in
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the
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nature. A prime example is Nepal, they have a particular
place
for
animals
as well as a specific
rehabilitation
programme
has taken to save endangered
animals
. In conclusion, the growth of population is the main cause of
this
problem.
However
,
this
can be solved if the government give a
separated
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separate
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place
for
animals
and
also
, they should take
rehabilitation
programme
.
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