You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Kat, Hope things are fine at your end. I am really excited to share

this

news with you. I have shifted to a new apartment in Etobicoke. It has been 3 days since I moved from downtown, Toronto and I am thrilled to let you know about my new place. So it actually is on the 23rd floor of Valhalla inn apartments. It is a 2 BHK apartment, fully furnished and with all amenities. I love the modular kitchen, it is easy to clean every time the kitchen gets dirty. The supermarket is only a 2-minute walk from my place and there is a park for kids

to my building. I was surprised to see a library on the corner of my street, as you know I am a book lover. I must mention the Italian restaurants in my neighbourhood.I just can't wait to take you there for I heard they have 60+ varieties of pizza. You must now be knowing how excited I am to reside in

this

place. I am hoping to see you around sometime, probably over the weekend. You can spend a night with me and we can have a gala. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Kind regards, Jane

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