Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us buy things. Other people think that is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Advertisement
has always been a crucial part of the world of marketing.Throughout the decade we have seen a significant increase in Le television or the amount of advertisements
, whether it is widespread through social network platforms. The on the modis he goal of advertisements
is to consumers to buy a targeted product
and while
this
method has been proven considerably generally, some people
view it as too prevalent to catch the consumers' attention any tort
Advertisements
can act as a strong persuasion device to seemingly hypnotize people
Into buying goods and services. This
is so because of the tactics placed in the messages, such
as shoving people
having a good time together when using a particular product
, using Bandwagen, showing only upsides of usage, and applying compare and contrast strategies to show the effects of using the product
and make it stand out, Even if people
do not know it, these messages are repeated several times and soon it may brainwash people
to Finally
go out and get the product
. For instance
, if a person is watching television and sees a certain advertisement
for a snack many times, the repeated sight of the scrumptious food may result in that person feeling hungry and succumbing to the advertisement
at last
.
Nevertheless
, there is another point of view in which the widespread of advertisements
makes it a normal thing. After watching a dozen of advertisements
people
will see it as a mere everyday routine and cease to pay attention to the message of the advertisement
. Some people
may even choose to turn off a television channel, for instance
, only just to avoid seeing and hearing repetitive advertisements
. ments. After a certain frequency, they start to get bored and stop paying attention to ads. Hence
, in the end, the main goal of advertisements
is not complete since the people
to whom the messages are sent out do not receive that message. A real-life example can be seen in advertisements
on a particular social media platform, YouTube, In the YouTube marketing mechanism, advertisements
are placed before and in between videos, hoping that the viewers would iso be forced to watch the advertisements
, too. However
, this
is not usually the case, since many people
would just click "Skip Ad" and continue on
In conclusion, advertisements
can be successful in persuading people
to purchase goods and services, or they can be unsuccessful in many ways. They are very commonly seen nowadays, but not all of them fulfil their purpose. Thus
, advertisements
must be designed and presented in the Tect way to result in the highest effectiveness.Submitted by ashraftaukir on
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