Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Hobby
is an important form of activity Change the article
A hobby
which
can bring happiness and comfort to mankind during their leisure Correct pronoun usage
that
time
; Use synonyms
however
, there is only a minority of Linking Words
people
who completely spend Use synonyms
time
on it. There Use synonyms
seems
to be some reasons why and a variety of damage effects on each person and the group of community, which we will discuss here.
Probably, the main factor is the issue of lacking Change the verb form
seem
time
. Because of the upswing in the economy, many Use synonyms
people
make an effort to work and study to afford the cost in their daily life. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they spend most of their Linking Words
time
Use synonyms
on
making money and knowledge, reducing their recreation Change preposition
apply
time
, leading to high chances of being exhausted and less interested in hobbies. Use synonyms
Moreover
, due to the development of technology, Linking Words
people
seem addicted to the Internet and electronic devices. Little by little, the Use synonyms
time
for what they are truly keen on has declined.
Less Use synonyms
devoting
to hobbies may cause a huge number of problems. For individually, should the Replace the word
devotion
time
for pursuit and relaxation be limited, there will be a downswing in dopamine (hormone of happiness) in our body, causing a higher rate of psychological issues, likely to decrease work performances. Use synonyms
In addition
, unless Linking Words
people
keep passionately using technology , their health problems (Use synonyms
diabete
, short-sightedness, visual impairments) can easily be healed. Correct your spelling
diabetes
For instance
, according to a survey, 70 Linking Words
percent
of students in a province of Vietnam have short-sightedness because of using technical devices for a long Change the spelling
per cent
time
. For society, not spending Use synonyms
time
on some entertainment activities can lead to a limit in social networks. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the economy can be affected negatively resulting in the falling productivity of an organization.
In conclusion, we see that being too busy and wasting Linking Words
time
on the internet are the main reasonsUse synonyms
,
and that the effect on both each person and community are worse by health problems and the economy.Remove the comma
apply
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