many government think economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. discuss both view and give your opinion.
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governments
whith
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to
our life.
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on
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role
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, economy
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the economy
an economy
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in a country
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another country
other countries
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. Besides
people
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people
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another country
other countries
country
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the country’s
development
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the
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country
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.
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economics
country
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solutions
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build
country’s
development
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apply
People
in the country
which has a great background from their education has a great roll
in their society’s life. Correct your spelling
role
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example
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,example
people
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entrepreuners
.
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entrepreneurs
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the Economy
to
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on
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a country’s
development
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others
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other
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. Like educations
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the educations
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