Some people think that it is better to participate in sports that are played in teams, such as soccer, while others believe that participation in individual sports, such as tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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sports became

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part of our

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life.as we know some sports depends on

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of players like basketball while other one player is enough like golf.in

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will discuss both

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then

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will draw my personal opinion. On one hand,some people argue

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game that consists

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persons is more beneficial.

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,it's better because it has a high level of competition ,to illustrate in my

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team

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Real

madrid

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,Marcello and

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thay

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they

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fight and train

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to take the position.

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new friends in the stadium.

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meeting between us was when we play football at NSR academy so now he is my

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pest

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friend.

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,when you play alone like when you be a

tenniser

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tennis

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Federer

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some advantages like it's less injury than when you play within

group

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a group

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make

sure compare between Ronaldo and

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Federer

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you will take more than if you with

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team

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.

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,if you are a

team

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around

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person

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and you win on champions and the prize was 1000SR you will get 100Sr while if

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alone you will

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it all. In conclusion,after careful analysis of both

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i

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suggests the played on

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team

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the team

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more

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better than when you play individual.

also

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advice

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you to let your children play with

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team

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the team

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to be dependent on

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him self

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on

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the future.