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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, consumption of
plastic
 increase significantly,
as a result
, it produces a devastating effect on waterways species and seabird and even landfill. In some ,countries
plastic
bags
 are already banned and I completely agree that
plastic
bags
 should be banned to maintain an
enviormental
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environmental
 balance.
To begin
 with,
plastic
bags
 are non-biodegradable
therefore
 it's not recycled and end up with landfill and ocean pollution and food chain imbalance. As more than 3 trillion single-use
bags
 put into the ocean every minute, the accumulated size of garbage in the ocean is more than Franse and double of Parise and it's hard to recycle
this
.
This
 is responsible for more than 100,000 death of
marine
 animals and 500000 death of seabords.
For example
,
plastic
 bag comes into light from 1950 to 2015 more than of
trillions
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plastic
bags
 were created from them only 9 % were recycled.
Its
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 good to banned
plastic
bags
 to save endangered species. Certainly,
ban
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a ban
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 on
plastic
bags
 create awareness among people.
As a result
, people carry theirs
on
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bags
 to shopping. If a single-use
plastic
 bag is banned from the country, people tostart
avoid
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to avoid
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 other
plastic
 things like earbuds, water botters,
plastic
 plates.It helps to maintain the environment clean.
For example
, In Canada
plastic
bags
 are completely banned and paper
bags
 are used
instead
 of
plastic
bags
. That’s why it's required to ban
plastic
bags
. In conclusion, to protect endangered
marine
 species and animals, a ban on
the
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plastic
 material is a must,
then
 only we can able to control land and
marine
 pollution. And maintain the ecosystem to control any diverse effects on human being and flora and fauna and
marine
 animals.
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