In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, consumption of
plastic
increase significantly,
as a result
, it produces a devastating effect on waterways species and seabird and even landfill. In some ,countries
plastic
bags
are already banned and I completely agree that
plastic
bags
should be banned to maintain an
enviormental
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environmental
balance.
To begin
with,
plastic
bags
are non-biodegradable
therefore
it's not recycled and end up with landfill and ocean pollution and food chain imbalance. As more than 3 trillion single-use
bags
put into the ocean every minute, the accumulated size of garbage in the ocean is more than Franse and double of Parise and it's hard to recycle
this
.
This
is responsible for more than 100,000 death of
marine
animals and 500000 death of seabords.
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,
plastic
bag comes into light from 1950 to 2015 more than of
trillions
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plastic
bags
were created from them only 9 % were recycled.
Its
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good to banned
plastic
bags
to save endangered species. Certainly,
ban
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a ban
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on
plastic
bags
create awareness among people.
As a result
, people carry theirs
on
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bags
to shopping. If a single-use
plastic
bag is banned from the country, people tostart
avoid
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other
plastic
things like earbuds, water botters,
plastic
plates.It helps to maintain the environment clean.
For example
, In Canada
plastic
bags
are completely banned and paper
bags
are used
instead
of
plastic
bags
. That’s why it's required to ban
plastic
bags
. In conclusion, to protect endangered
marine
species and animals, a ban on
the
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plastic
material is a must,
then
only we can able to control land and
marine
pollution. And maintain the ecosystem to control any diverse effects on human being and flora and fauna and
marine
animals.
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