Traffic jams are a problem for individuals to use roads freely in major cities. What problems does it have for individuals? How individuals can reduce traffic?

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The
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of
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jams occurs almost daily in large cities and generates a wave of problems in the environment,
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as noise pollution, problems at work and anxiety. In
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I will propose some possible solutions to face and prevent
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type of
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. For me,
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can be addressed in two ways, the first as an immediate action plan when a major jam occurs, and
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as a preventive measure to reduce or have a more favorable situation when the
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occurs. Many times high-
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highways do not have immediate help services, in these cases they seek to reestablish another road and search for an operation that free transit. A timely intervention can make a big difference, considering that the more time passes, the bigger the
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becomes.
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, we must consider that the roads are designed for a certain number of vehicles, and an excessive circulation of cars increases the possibility of an accident occurring. To control
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, vehicle restrictions must be increased, with greater oversight so that people comply, paying even more attention to those dates when people go out and use these roads more.
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measure not only helps prevent
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jams
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but
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improves air quality, promoting the use of other means of transportation,
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, the subway, bus or bicycle. In conclusion, we can say that the
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of
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jams in the first place is largely avoidable with
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operational team, where a quick and safe solution is provided so that people can continue driving.
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, it is important for the city to know the
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flows to restrict their number for special occasions and
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have a smaller number of cars circulating.

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