‘Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Newspapers should not publish personal details of politicians. I completely agree with

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statement as

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might cause dangerous threats not only to them but

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to their entire family members.

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, knowing about their personal lives might damage

politician

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careers. Publishing political

leaders

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leaders'

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personal details will create dangerous threats from opponent leaders or terrorists by attacking them when they are out. In order to fulfil their ,needs they might even attack

politicians'

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or their families.

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due to

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the media publishing his information like which place they go for jogging in the morning or which school his children go to.

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, YS. Jagan Mohan Reddy, Chief

Ministers

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of Andhra Pradesh, uncle got killed before state elections to threaten him not to participate in the elections.

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, they injured his left arm when he was taking a morning walk. CBI proved that a local magazine recently published an article before

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incident, completely about him and his family whom he

closely

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is with. Not only is there a threat to politicians' lives but

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would damage their

career

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careers

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by posting their personal photos of having alcohol during

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their

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family

party

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parties

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. People who follow him might not like his habits.

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might impact future elections

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voting for him as a leader.

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, The Hindu newspaper published an article about Narendra Modi Prime Minister of India that he ran away the night he got married and his wife's photos too.

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news was published it affected his follower’s count on social media. Many opponents had trolled him after knowing

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, politician

personals

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should not be published because it is a risk to their lives as they go through threats.

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, it will affect their career if their personal life is revealed to the public as their fans might not like.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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