‘Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Newspapers should not publish personal details of politicians. I completely agree with
this
statement as this
might cause dangerous threats not only to them but also
to their entire family members. Also
, knowing about their personal lives might damage politician
careers.
Publishing political Fix the agreement mistake
politicians
leaders
personal details will create dangerous threats from opponent leaders or terrorists by attacking them when they are out. In order to fulfil their ,needs they might even attack Change noun form
leaders'
leader's
politicians'
or their families. Change noun form
politicians
This
is due to
the media publishing his information like which place they go for jogging in the morning or which school his children go to. For example
, YS. Jagan Mohan Reddy, Chief Ministers
of Andhra Pradesh, uncle got killed before state elections to threaten him not to participate in the elections. Fix the agreement mistake
Minister
Also
, they injured his left arm when he was taking a morning walk. CBI proved that a local magazine recently published an article before this
incident, completely about him and his family whom he closely
is with.
Not only is there a threat to politicians' lives but Rephrase
apply
also
would damage their career
by posting their personal photos of having alcohol during Fix the agreement mistake
careers
his
family Correct pronoun usage
their
party
. People who follow him might not like his habits. Fix the agreement mistake
parties
Therefore
this
might impact future elections while
voting for him as a leader. For example
, The Hindu newspaper published an article about Narendra Modi Prime Minister of India that he ran away the night he got married and his wife's photos too. After
this
news was published it affected his follower’s count on social media. Many opponents had trolled him after knowing this
.
To conclude
, politician personals
should not be published because it is a risk to their lives as they go through threats. Replace the word
personalities
In addition
to this
, it will affect their career if their personal life is revealed to the public as their fans might not like.Submitted by yasaswini.gopisetty on
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