Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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The advent of technology has made our life hassle-free in every aspect.
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many
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argue
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by saying that
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it has reversed the trend and made it horrible. I wholeheartedly disagree with
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essay, I will support my views with examples.
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and foremost, one of the major benefits of technology is that it had made storing
data
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quite easy and accessible .
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is because earlier the
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used to do
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entry in registers, and it consumes a lot of time, yet it is not efficient enough
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about to access it briskly .
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, software like MS office stores
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, and it does not even take a fraction of a
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it is that swift. If,
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,
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would have
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dependent on their rote memory, so
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it would become impossible for big multinational giants to even invent
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in the
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place, which stores a lot of
data
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to keep us exposed to existing knowledge.
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, when it comes to communication, the gadget
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as mobile phones have proved to be enormously useful. Earlier the
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used to send letters to communicate with
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friends and it takes around 10 days to reach the recipient, and let alone the time for the reply. To illustrate
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time, Nowadays, it just takes one
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hardly for a video call to connect with mates.
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, during an emergency ,
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you can call authorities as quickly you want, but I fear the times when you don't have the luxury to do so. In conclusion, due to aid in efficiently storing information and faster contact with peers, I believe technology has changed our
life
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and made
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them
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significantly better.
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