some people claim that not enough of waste from home is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Waste
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recycling is our
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step to make our planet neat and clean. Most
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believe that
waste
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from
home
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recycling is less they
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believe that the authorities should make some laws to increase recycling from
home
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waste
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. I agree with the aforementioned statement and I will discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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with, some
people
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do not care about what is happening all over the world. They do not bother about cleaning too. So, the
government
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should make laws to clear the environment
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as recycle
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home
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wastage
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. It is fact that folks obey the rules
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made by the ministry.
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, due to
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the covid19
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pandemic
government
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make a law to wear
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in
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public area. With
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, there is less chance of infection. Henceforth,
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follow
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rule without any questions.
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, the
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should
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impose
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to
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those
people
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who do not recycle their
home
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waste
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.
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, with the fear of
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they will obey the rules.
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, the
government
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should
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arrange some seminars in which
pros
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the pros
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of recycling Can explain.
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, bring awareness among youth and senior citizens.
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, in a survey, it was found that Japan becomes
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number one country in recycling more
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waste
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. The
Japan
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authorities brought awareness among their citizens and there
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also
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strict laws for those who do not recycle their
wastage
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. To conclude, I think with the help of the
government
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people
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will recycle their domestic
wastage
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. It is fact that
people
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only following regulations made by the authorities so it is a viable solution to take legal action against those who do not bother
their
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domestic
wastage
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.
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