Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this?

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is the externalization of individual talent. It is considered that in some era human beings think that the government is wasting money on
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and can be spent on other sectors of society for
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life, In my opinion,
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plays
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life and it is crucial for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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