Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this?
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is the externalization of individual talent. It is considered that in some era human beings think that the government is wasting money on art
and can be spent on other sectors of society for healthy
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