At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
At present, the
number
of young Use synonyms
adults
in some countries is relatively larger than the Use synonyms
number
of older Use synonyms
people
. It seems that the pros of Use synonyms
this
situation outweigh the cons as energy, ambitions and motivation usually come from younger Linking Words
people
.
On the one hand, elderly ones have a lot of valuable experience that can be utilized in a Use synonyms
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of spheres. Use synonyms
In addition
, their honed skills can allow them to do certain tasks significantly faster than younger colleagues. Linking Words
However
, older Linking Words
people
tend to follow outdated outlook and have difficulties with new technologies and methods. Use synonyms
This
is because their brain gets stuck in habits formed by constantly repeated actions. Linking Words
For example
, some scientific experiments proved that young Linking Words
adults
learn new skills two times faster than older ones. Despite having experience, the great Use synonyms
number
of elderly Use synonyms
people
can slow down advances in different spheres.
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On the other hand
, young Linking Words
adults
have a lot of ambitions and energy to prove to everyone that they can do almost anything. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they are in the peak form in terms of physiology and Linking Words
this
allows them to withstand a great amount of pressure and stress. Some of them start a family creating additional motivation to act and achieve higher results. Linking Words
For instance
, a Linking Words
number
of millionaires say that the main motivation for any young man is a family. Use synonyms
Thus
, countries that include a relatively large Linking Words
number
of young Use synonyms
adults
are highly likely to develop faster than others.
In conclusion, a relatively high Use synonyms
number
of young Use synonyms
adults
in comparison with older ones has more advantages than disadvantages as young Use synonyms
people
are more motivated and ambitious. Use synonyms
Such
a tendency is very beneficial for countries focused on fast growth.Linking Words
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