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The depicted flowchart depicts the manufacturing
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 of plastic
paper
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clips
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 in ‎a small factory.‎
Paper
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clips
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' manufacturing starts with molten plastic being poured into the ‎
molds
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, namely blue, red, and yellow, to get
paper
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clips
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 of these
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colors
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. After ‎
molding
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, the
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 are tested for their endurance with a quality control ‎mechanism, and the
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 not found appropriate are rejected.‎ The
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 fulfilling the design and strength parameters are assorted by hand in a ‎pre-established pattern or as per the queries received into batches of mixed
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colors
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 ‎and single
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colors
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. After completing the sorting
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, the pieces are subject to ‎another quality control
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 to ensure the exact distribution of
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 mix or ‎single
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colors
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 as per requirements. After completion of
this
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 final stage, the
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 ‎are packed and shipped to the markets.‎ Overall, plastic
paper
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clips
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' manufacturing
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 involves four stages, starting ‎with
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 to final dispatch. ‎
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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