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Getting pregnant, sustaining pregnancy and achieving a live birth prove to be difficult for some couples. What are some serious problems associated with infertility

#pregnancy #live #birth #couples #infertility
In general, a child is a person who
fulfills
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a
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happiness of a family. Some
people
 are struggling to have a baby.
Therefore
, it becomes a serious issue for some couples.
This
 essay will explain
adverse
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 impacts of
infertility
. And
also
, presenting ways by which
people
 can adopt to improve these impacts.
Infertility
 can contribute to several violent
problems
on
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 both families and societies. In the aspect of the families, some couple may feel that
infertility
 threatens their marriage’s life since they have no chance to have their own children.
Furthermore
, they might get stress which may lead them to some
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problems
.
Moreover
,
infertility
 affects directly
to
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the
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societies because it
cause
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population
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 to decrease if the majority cannot produce
the
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 child.
In addition
 to
this
, it is obvious that a country may develop ineffectively since the children are the main source of new generations who tend to invent new things and ideas in order to improve the country. To solve those
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,
the
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collaboration between the population and the government is required. The government should provide a free annual health check to the citizens so that they can protect themselves from getting serious illnesses. Another important thing is to encourage
people
 to have more awareness regarding foods and nutritions by revealing the appetizing of healthy foods. While
people
 have
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better health, they are ready to get pregnant
,
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 and achieving a live birth.
On the other hand
, the population should support each
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 without ignoring someone behind.
For example
, allowing
people
 to communicate
to
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 each
others
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 about
the
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health
problems
.
This
 may make them feel more comfortable than talking with doctors. In conclusion,
although
,
infertility
 is likely to become major barriers in
people
’s
life
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, the problem can
be solve
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 by several methods with the cooperation of the citizens and the government.
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