below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents.‎

The pie chart illustrates different destinations of Anthropology
graduates
from ‎one particular university. The table shows their income levels after five years of ‎work in three sectors.‎ Overall, most
graduates
took full-time jobs while the least percentage of
graduates
‎chose to take part-time work together with postgraduate study. As much as 50% ‎of those employed in the government sector earned $100,000 or more per year. ‎ Meanwhile, 40% of freelance
consultants
and 30% of those employed by private ‎companies
also
managed to earn
this
amount. While 80% of freelance
consultants
‎and those employed by the government managed to earn upwards of ‎‎$75,000/year, only 55% of those in the private sector earned that much.‎ ‎ 52% of
graduates
were employed full-time, compared to 15% who worked
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and 12% unemployed. While 8% of students took up full-time postgraduate ‎study, another 8% was unknown. Only 5% of
graduates
opted to do both
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works and pursue higher education.‎ Turning to the table, 80% of freelance
consultants
were employed at higher salary ‎ranges, with 40% in both $75,000 to $99,000 and $100,000+. Meanwhile, ‎freelance
consultants
had identical figures with government workers at lower ‎salary brackets, with 20% earning less than $74,000. 50% of federal workers ‎earned more than $100,000, while 30% of them were in the $75,000 to $99,999 ‎range.
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, private industry salaries were evenly distributed, with 10% in the ‎lowest $25,000 to $49,999 bracket and a striking 35% in
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50,000 to $74,999 ‎scale. Only 55% of workers in private companies earned more than $75,000.‎
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