I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for a experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy. Therefore, I am writing to apply for the post of a baker in your company.

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I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for an experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy.

Therefore

, I am writing to apply for the post of

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baker in your company. I graduated from the baking faculty of Sg Tourist Vocational College in 2008.

Then

, I worked as a baker for DP Bakery for four years before I opened my own one in 2013. Up to now, I have had approximately seven years of experience in making cakes

such

as muffin, sandwich, bread and so forth. With my nature of diligence together with my extensive experience,

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feel confident that I will meet your recruitment requirements and contribute significantly to your development plans as long as I am employed. Enclosed in

this

letter are my resume, a medical check-up and certificates relating to my banking as well as my English skills. I am willing to discuss

further

information in more detail when you grant me a job interview at your convenience. I would like to take

this

opportunity to thank you for taking my letter into concern. I am

also

looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for a experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy. Therefore, I am writing to apply for the post of a baker in your company.

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Topic: Some people believe online reading material should be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion?