I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for a experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy. Therefore, I am writing to apply for the post of a baker in your company.

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I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for an experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy.

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, I am writing to apply for the post of

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baker in your company. I graduated from the baking faculty of Sg Tourist Vocational College in 2008.

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, I worked as a baker for DP Bakery for four years before I opened my own one in 2013. Up to now, I have had approximately seven years of experience in making cakes

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as muffin, sandwich, bread and so forth. With my nature of diligence together with my extensive experience,

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feel confident that I will meet your recruitment requirements and contribute significantly to your development plans as long as I am employed. Enclosed in

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letter are my resume, a medical check-up and certificates relating to my banking as well as my English skills. I am willing to discuss

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information in more detail when you grant me a job interview at your convenience. I would like to take

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opportunity to thank you for taking my letter into concern. I am

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looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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5 paragraphs

197 words

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I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for a experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy. Therefore, I am writing to apply for the post of a baker in your company.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that old buildings should be protected by law. Others, however, think that they should be replaced by new buildings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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TOPIC: In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?