Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays several
people
argue that living in big cities is becoming harder while others believe it is easier than before. I believe that living in an urban is more convenient. In this
essay , I will discuss both views and give examples below.
The main benefit of living in a large city
is that people
are able to access many services whatever they need. This
is because having schools , hospitals , accommodation and transportation which make our living easier. For example
, In Jeddah city
when people
are looking for a house to buy or a flat to rent , they will find many choices while in a rural area they cannot. In addition
, in most of the big cities if someone gets sick and need to see a doctor there are plenty of hospitals which no need to travel far away to take health care because it is already nearby . As a result
of this
, in an urban people
can have more comfortable live and convenient than in the countryside. There is no doubt that many services will make people
live more suitable.
However
, the main disadvantage of living in a big city
is the cost
of living which make our life more difficult. This
is because in an urban the price of buying a house or a flat in a city
is increasing a double than ten years ago. For example
, in Dubai in the past five ,years people
can buy an apartment in the downtown centre which cost
almost two hundreds dollar while now the price increase double. As a result
of this
, many people
cannot afford to live in a big city
because it is very expensive. Therefore
, the cost
of life
will affect poor Replace the word
living
people
and make it hard to be in a city
.
In conclusion, for some people
that living in a big city
is more easy and convenient while others believe it is really difficult because of the high cost
and much of air pollution.Submitted by ms.056 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite