In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are main cause of crime? How can we deal with those cause?

Across the globe,

crime

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rate has been noticed to be on the rise. A number of factors are responsible for

this

and various solutions are proposed to effect a change.

Crime

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rate has risen over the years, basically due to

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of jobs. Most youths, having completed their tertiary education expects a government paying job, which is more often than not, unavailable. As

such

, they search for a means to make ends meet and one of

such

includes

crime

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, a classmate of mine who searched for a job endlessly after graduation but to no avail

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subsequently

got introduced to bad friends who suggested he joins them in a robbery operation. He complied,

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he was unfortunate as he got himself arrested at their

first

operation. Other factors responsible for

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rate ascent includes

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laziness, the urgent need to amass wealth via the easiest route possible, as young boys have taken to defrauding people in a bid to become wealthy.

Hence

, they get involved in internet fraud known as yahoo. In other to remedy

this

situation, the government has a major role to play in providing jobs for graduates,

this

can be achieved by building more industries and diversification of already existing ones.

Secondly

, large organisations can open up branches in developing areas,

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would reduce the number of youth seeking employment.

Thirdly

, applicants can create occupational opportunity for self by becoming entrepreneurs. Those who are gifted can maximize their talents rather than descending low to committing an offence.

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my cousin who studied business administration started painting after graduation because he could not secure a

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job,

thus

he maximised his creative talent. In summary, heightened rates of

crime

registered across the globe

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as a result

of a defect in governance and the irresponsibility of certain persons. The solutions

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within these same hands.