Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle the problem?

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criminal does not do the violation after their prison time. Personally, I believe

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shall commit

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more than once after serving their cell term.

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essay will argue that convict

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commit

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more than once , using examples from the UK government and the University of British Columbia to demonstrate points and prove the arguments. On the other ,hand there is ample evidence gangster commit the same

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because they are addicted to performing crimes. The central reason behind

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is twofold,

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the corrective jail term is not properly served and the jailer performs no counselling of the individual.

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,there should be remorse of the

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performed so that soul could feel and physical habits could be performed.

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, recent empirical research by the UK government demonstrated that 90 % of

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performed

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more than once as they have no mental

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. It must not be forgotten that

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is performed due to both mental and physical unfitness Therefor it is conclusively clear that mental

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should take place in jails so that

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could be stopped and

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could be protected from these mentally sick

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.

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there is a case for a decline in crimes following the

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sentence in prison, and even

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working in a

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with love and affection enriching

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in a positive way. the impact of

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committing

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repeatedly cannot be overstated.

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because jail time provides rigorous imprisonment not only improves

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better responsible human.

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, an extensive study by dr Sigmund Freud the eminent psychoanalytic conducted on human behaviour and cognitive skills revealed that humans improve if they are mentally realised of their mistakes. Consistent with

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line of thinking is that

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can be stopped if jailers trained to improve

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and work on an individual basis on prisoners during their sentence period.

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it is possible to state beyond doubt that

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can be permanent if suitable measures are taken for

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in corrective facilities for prisoners. From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that

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cannot be stopped if

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are not trained to behave and function in

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in the normal manner.