Some people believe that it is a good idea to express their points of views and ideas through social media. However, others believe the opposite. Who do you support and why?

Social media is a tool

that is

becoming popular these days because of its user-friendly features. It has connected many communities with each other all over the world. A platform where citizens can express their stand and feelings. Like how there are always two sides to a coin, the same goes for social media.I believe that these sites are mainly beneficial for individuals. Through

this

essay, I would like to enlighten my opinion on a shared subject. Social networking sites like Facebook, Instagram, Whatsapp and more have given a chance to society to put their views on a vast platform.

For example

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you can create a group and share your prospect with your friends and loved ones in

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. Humans who are very vocal on any issues put their views on these sites. It shows who one is, interest and disagreement too. There is no harm in sharing one's point of view unless it provokes a fraction of the population on certain issues.

This

tool is really a boon to those who are shy. Introvert people who are not comfortable focusing on their inner thoughts in front of audiences can present themselves easily on

this

platform.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people believe that it is a good idea to express their points of views and ideas through social media. However, others believe the opposite. Who do you support and why?

Fully explain your ideas

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