Some people think adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others think they should learn with teachers in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Learning practical skills is an important part of any individual in today's world. Lacking
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seems
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to compete in
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life. Whether we learn skills from themself or from
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, both are equally beneficial.
Approach
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of each individual will determine the growth of the nation. Individual learning of
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own is useful in the sense that it will help him to understand the basics very well. As you know human being learn from mistakes, it increases
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effectiveness and output. It helps in professional
development
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For Instance
,
surgeon
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the surgeon
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raises his skill level by performing
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good volume of surgeries and improving the practice.
Although
, it involves
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of time and hard work. Learning from
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a teacher
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in
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the classroom
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is equally beneficial as it easy to grab and it is from
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authentic
athentic
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source.
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the
teacher
in class and it makes the learning lucid.
For instance
,
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learning
driving
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in a school is perfect only when we learn under
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the supervision
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of the
teacher
.
However
, it
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time and money.
Class
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The class
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teacher
judges the person very well and
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him
accordingly
. In conclusion, individual learning or classroom learning, both
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equal importance for personal
development
. Both
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a vital role in personal
development
at
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period of time. Nation
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an individual's
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personality
development
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