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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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Recidivism is a significant problem, face by the majority of
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countries. Most of the offender, re-commit the crime without the fear of punishment they had gone through. Indeed, sometimes the reasons for being a re-offender are unemployment,
education
 and unacceptance from society.
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societies in order to
control
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 kind of situation. There are two main reasons why ex-prisoners enforce themselves for the offence.
Firstly
, most of the time prisoners unable to survive a normal life after completing imprisonment, because people always treat them as
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guilty of
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 and not accept them in
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society. As a ,result to take
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, they perform harmful actions.
Secondly
, they are not well educated to get employment and serve their basic needs. In order to get rid of ,unemployment they involved themselves in burglary and robbery.
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 rate is getting increased rapidly and
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 required to take proper action to
control
 them. Certainly, to
control
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 required to adapt few methods including rehabilitation,
education
 and acceptance by societies. Indeed, rehabilitation would not only help to overcome the drugs and alcohol addiction it
also
 helps to rebuild the personality of prisoners. Along with
this
,
education
 of life skills is
also
 a must and it should be included from the
first
 day of their entrance in prison, it helps to get employment after their exit.
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 society needs to come forward and treat them as
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normal human being to make their survival easy. So, governments and societies need to include
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 solution in order to overcome
this
 problem. In conclusion, to
control
 the proliferation of crime by re-offender it required to include rehabilitation and
education
 in incarceration.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recidivism
  • rehabilitation
  • reintegration
  • social stigma
  • vocational training
  • economic desperation
  • mental health support
  • institutionalization
  • peer influence
  • mentorship programs
  • crime cycle
  • societal inclusion
  • job readiness programs
  • re-offending
  • ex-offenders
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