Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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health
is the greatest asset and wealth of a nation. Use synonyms
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, governments spend budget money on population Linking Words
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care. Meanwhile, some Use synonyms
people
believe that the budgetary funds should be spent on the prevention of Use synonyms
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education rather than cure. In my opinion, it is a sound idea.
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-related issues prevention cannot be denied. Use synonyms
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of all, a country's economic development has a clear link to the Linking Words
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condition of its citizens. Use synonyms
For instance
, iodine is vitally important for Linking Words
people
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thus
, Linking Words
people
who have a deficit of iodine are passive and unengaged. Use synonyms
Therefore
, timely measures of the government to prevent vitamin deficits can have a conducive effect on economic development. Linking Words
Secondly
, many Linking Words
people
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; as those were detected late. That happens because Use synonyms
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in developing countries try to treat themselves prior to going to hospitals. Use synonyms
Therefore
, governments should Linking Words
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focus on educating Linking Words
people
and making them understand the importance of yearly check-ups.
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Moreover
, free medical care would encourage Linking Words
people
to go to hospitals; Use synonyms
consequently
, many Linking Words
diseases
could be prevented. Use synonyms
For example
, in Germany Linking Words
health
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insurances can get free medical care.
To sum up, I strongly believe that prevention of Use synonyms
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issues is more important than treatment and beneficial on different levels. Governments should promote a healthy lifestyle, Use synonyms
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thus
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diseases
may be timely detected and cured.Use synonyms
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