Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A part of our society believes(,) that lifestyle and basic values that are declared by mature people
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are useless to teens and their plans. I totally disagree with
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accepting my point of view.
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, despite rapid changes in currency, no one would argue, that there are always some monumental spheres like health, honour, trust, donating, that
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still the same from the beginning of our era.
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we still study ancient philosophers, classic authors and go through research projects about our grandparents to collect fragments of wisdom. It means that previous experience is really helpful for our kids’ development and evolution.
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, young people spend a lot of time with their parents and relatives, automatically absorbing their habits and traditional ideas.
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, based on my experience as a father, I can declare, that teens researching the world are open to variable ideas, and they reach for skilled individuals.
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, my daughters have been asking me
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6 ages for different
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to me about what to do in different situations, how they can make the right decision, what are my thoughts about their choice. As far as I remember, I was the same and asked for
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my grandfather. All in all, my ultimate believes that traditional ideas about
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of life from older people can help youngers a lot, consists of theoretical knowledge and practical cases. My nearests' and my own experience shows that wise
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from adults can help our new generation to decide the right way to live.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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