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The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree with the statement?

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As global communication expands throughout the
world
, so does the need for a global
language
.
English
 has become the lingua franca in many parts of the
world
.
This
 essay will discuss the merits and demerits caused by
English
 as a global
language
.
English
 is a very effective
language
 as it is proved by native and non-native speakers all over the
world
. Statistics suggest that nearly half of the
world
 population is familiar with
this
language
.
Moreover
,
English
 is easier to learn than any other
language
.
For example
, unlike Chinese,
English
 has only 26 alphabets which put together to form words. Adding to that, a number of
English
 words are borrowed from many other languages and many
English
 words are adopted in other languages and are used as part of their own
language
.
Furthermore
,
English
 is the
language
 of technology. To make the best use of the internet knowing
English
 is necessary.
Also
, any international meeting will be probably done in
English
. It
also
 makes tourism easy, as it helps in better understanding among the people.
However
, many fear that
English
 as a global
language
 would result in the extinction of local cultures which are interrelated with regional languages.
Moreover
, it is bounded to be divided into dialects. Another drawback is that the works of many authors and writers who are belonging to different territories become incomprehensible. In conclusion, I believe that there are more advantages than disadvantages in globalizing the
English
language
. In future, the demand for
English
 would rise as more people are learning
this
language
 and would decrease the nation barrier.
Submitted by shoira.shakirovna on

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