Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often said that modern farming is a key area of scientific research, with broad advantages for all human societies. While I accept that developed agriculture may have its dangers, I believe that the benefits of scientists method outweigh the drawbacks. The negative implication of modern agriculture
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often discussed in term of one key area, which is
crops
production. Genetically modified crop
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already being grown, and people are most concerned that they may damage whole ecosystems as
crops
become resistant to diseases and natural predators. But perhaps even more worrying is the possibility that
such
crops
and using pesticides and herbicides could cause cancer, asthma and other respiratory diseases. Another implication of using pesticides is that precipitation can wash and transmit
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to
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or even rivers. When these chemicals come
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underwater can cause water
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toxic and
such
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threat for all creature that drink water. A more optimistic prediction, and one that I favour, is that scientists will find ways to mitigate the risks and use genetic technologies and developed farming in a responsible way. From the
crops
production perspective, genetic engineering could be the solution to famine in developing countries, if,
for instance
,
crops
can be grown more reliably in harsh conditions.
Also
, the human population is exploding and
this
means demand for more and more foods so old-fashioned farming ways cannot produce
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of
crops
that meet the eating needs of human.
However
, scientists can use genetic engineering method to make
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that have huge fruit compare with traditional agriculture in equal condition.
Furthermore
, genetically modified plant
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not need
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insecticides and there is no risk of aquifer contamination. In conclusion, I am convinced that modern farming will have a positive impact on our lives
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and that people's fears will be unwarranted.
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