The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the discussion regarding whether great access to the
internet
is beneficial to
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society as a whole has sparked off an intense debate among
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internet
users. In my honest opinion,
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serves both good and bad functions.
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the one hand, it is
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undebatable
debatable
that the
internate
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internet
do provide to the entire public
unmearsurable
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unmeasurable
amount of
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convenience
.
Firstly
,the
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advancement
of Internets do
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the time consumed for people to reach remote information. Due to the
exisitence
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existence
of the
internet
,
poeple
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people
nowadays can just sit at
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hoe
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and get access to
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information all around the world,
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which may
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months to be got in the past.
Secondly
,
internets
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also
offers
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the public different alternatives in terms of the form of interaction. Thanks to the newly-developed signal
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transporters
transports
,
poeple
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people
are able to perform any kinds of communications with another individual
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the other half of the world via some online meeting tools like Zoom.
on the other hand
, it is
also
undeniable that the development of the
internet
also
cultivate the growth of crime and
therefore
harm
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society.
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is processed by the
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characteristics
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that, with the lack of
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system, nearly every
internet
user
posess
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possess
the right to pose literately everything on the
internet
, including illegal
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like porn.
therefore
, radicalized by
these unhealthy
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imformation
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information
, the public may have a tendency to
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destabilize
destabilized
the society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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